New Tune "Nightmare" online, Feedbackl appreciated

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  1. sarahc

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    New Tune "Nightmare" online, Feedbackl appreciated

    For any Hardhouse DJs/Producers or anyone else really...

    I would like to know what you think to this tune so far... its not finished yet but please do give comments...or any constructive critism.

    Cheers :D :D

    Please Click heeeeeere
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  3. trance_fan

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    Im not really a big fan of hard house any more...

    but I must say that that is actually pretty decent.

    Sounds professional, nowt stands out as sounding particularly ametur....

    If that was on some big DJs mix I would not think anything different.

    Good effort :D
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    sounds pretty decent, bass sounds pretty much spot on.

    kick is nice + driving, perc arrangement is fairly simple and the samples you are using sound fairly cheap but they sit well in the mix.

    the synths seem very dry, give them some more reverb + some real delay and a bit more eqing.

    breakbeat bit sounds really cool, again, choice of samples doesn't sit too well with me

    the idea of the fx is cool, yet again i don't really like the sample used, sorry.

    the idea of the track is structurally sound, but hard house isn't a very complex mix so you have to work hard at filling out the sounds, especially on the synths as i've already said. perhaps adding a rolling midbass ontop of the bass you already have could help beef it up a bit.

    all in all, good work. only other thing i can suggest is doing something original with the piece. a lot of hard house is structured very similarly, what i would call as ASOT-syndrome in trance. just something to think about.
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    thanks a lot chris glad u think its sounding professional like...

    Thanks a lot luke as well i will bare you comments in mind, print them off in fact and take them up stairs and work on it.

    its what i need... someone else who isnt biased (ie. a mate!) to tell me where im going wrong.... :D

    I will post when ive updated the track to see what you think..
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    u Writing a Book Luke?:lol:
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    978 characters is a small book, even by your standards ;)
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    Smart Arse!!!
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    not really, just click the check message length link when you are bout to post/edit to see how long it is :p
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    I know.... that will definately help me out a lot.

    thanks a lot luke...
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    no probs :)

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